• toomanyjoints69@lemmygrad.ml
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    1 year ago

    It gives me ai vibes. If it wasnt written by ai, then i think its a result of you trying to give it comic book voice when it should have x files voice. Using ai as a crutch when writing tends to make it feel grey like this does.

    If its not written with any ai, then i think the fact that it sounds removed Chat GPT wrote part of it is valuable feedback.

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      1 year ago

      Well spotted. I used AI to fill in the text based on where the story was going and how I wanted things to play out. It was an exercise in learning to use AI tools and a bit of a lark. I presented it as is because I honestly never intended it to be serious.