• SuperSaiyanSwag
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      1 year ago

      I should have said “in my opinion”. The final line just seems too much, maybe it works better as a comic strip? The “looks at daughter” seems necessary, but makes the punchline longer.

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        1 year ago

        You shouldn’t have pointed it out at all. Now we have to come up with a better punchline.

        Like: " Sorry kid, the bank does that"