Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 8 hours agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square13fedilinkarrow-up1145arrow-down15
arrow-up1140arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 8 hours agomessage-square13fedilink
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down1·4 hours agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down2·edit-23 hours agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up1·edit-22 hours agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.