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  • DemBones@vlemmy.nettoWriting@beehaw.orgMoon
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    1 year ago

    Pretty cool story, and the ending is intriguing enough, but the third paragraph has too many formatted words in our opinion. Having too many words in bold, cursive or strikethrough just doesn’t look well. We think that strikethroughs should really be avoided unless used humorously, and even then in little amounts. It really just makes the syntax appear worse.